Comments on: Unnamed #6.

By: Kylie

Kylie — Wed, 10 Feb 2010 21:05:31 +0000

“chewing one of his sweatshirt sleeves.”

This is probably my favorite part of your writing. The organic little nooks and crannies.

By: Jeff

Jeff — Tue, 12 Jan 2010 17:13:21 +0000

Wow, this is so fantastic. You get better with every damn post.

By: Marvin K. Mooney

Marvin K. Mooney — Sat, 09 Jan 2010 18:24:01 +0000

Dogs and love letters to help but wait we cannot find the grate or where have you been? we need you…

By: ~otto~

~otto~ — Sat, 09 Jan 2010 05:56:27 +0000

Loved the ending

By: vi

vi — Thu, 07 Jan 2010 04:30:41 +0000

i misread this line: “His taste in movies is a statistically regular taste for males: Fight Club, James Bond, Sparta.” i read “his” to mean the “dog.” after a re-reading, i corrected myself. i suspected that i liked canine with a film palette.

By: Mike

Mike — Wed, 06 Jan 2010 23:00:23 +0000

Wow. Beautiful.

By: Amy --- Just A Titch

Amy --- Just A Titch — Wed, 06 Jan 2010 21:21:50 +0000

Gorgeous. That last line especially.